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TomServo

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I was thinking about posting a story, but there's a part where there's a group of crazy racists that are burning people. When we start talking and asking what exactly they were doing they said "Burning -instert racial slur here". I was just wondering if I needed to tone it down for the site.

Although, I do look around and see worse things I was just wpondering if it was a bit too far.

I typed the sentence above without looking at the keyboard, watching the daily show, and thinking about what I was typing all at the same time (you can tell because wondering is misspelled)

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No worries.  It's fiction, anyways.


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Yea, alright, cool. Thanks RCS.
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So I can be racist as long as it's in the fiction section, right?
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If it makes sense in the context of the story I see no problem. 
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Well, I'm not sure racism is the worst part of the story. But I guess we'll see. I wish I was able to write more descriptively , I don't run out of ideas, but I sure don't know how to word it well or make it sound good unless I simplify the story's structure. I really want to get a lot of the dreadful feeling of the PAW into my story. 

Another cool thing is that the main characters themselves are far from saints. They stalk and kidnap people (especially if they're attracted to them) and bring them in the group.

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They stalk and kidnap people (especially if they're attracted to them) and bring them in the group.

You can expect a letter from my attorney. I never authorized my likeness to be used in your story.

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Well, you better sue me for a lot more. They rape people too
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You can expect a subpoena soon.


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Creeper will force feed you his subpoena

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I would think you were joking, but since we're talking about Creeper, I know you aren't.
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burning hippies? thats not a dirty word.

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