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As a whole, I liked that you guys didn't go into the explanation behind it, as that clearly was not the focus of the story. Which is why I praised that in the review. Though since you teased as to who was cause of it, I can see why
that would leave people wanting.
I didn't mind. I wondered afterwards, but I like the unconventionalness of that delivery.
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Really enjoyed this read. I was sat reading it in a very quiet GP Surgery waiting room and was pissing myself laughing at the scene with Jorge farting on Jimmy in the sparring cage
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I told D.L. and he says he appreciates that you appreciate it. __________________ SAD WINGS of DESTINY... the Abyss gazes back. (On sale at Amazon & BN.com)